Tai heard a sound “SSSSSSSSSS” It was a snake serpent approaching Tai. Tai screamed and ran to an open the old door and started to panic. His Heart Beated rapidly and he felt like fainting. Then something ran up to Tai and scratched tai from the back with a huge cut Tai was screaming “HELP! HELP!” there is something after me then Joshua ,sanujan and liam came racing down the stairs looking for tai, The shouted out “WHERE ARE YOU” tai replied instantly i'm in the room Joshua,sanujan and liam replied what room,there are thousand’s liam had a great idea to spl it up and go into different rooms to find tai. Finally we found him he was badly injured he quickly ran out of the house and they ran to the car and liam jumped across the car liam opened the door and slammed it with all his pressure he stood on the pedal drove as fast as he can down the road.
This week my group has been learning about narrative's. The Narrative I have chosen is about me and my friends in a hunted house.
This is a good work but this is simeler to Joshua W
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